How can I improve my online writing skills? Please look at my short poem about being a women. Thank you.?

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Yes this is serious. I get all A’s in my college level courses and after this class I will never need another English class AGAIN! My major is Engineering and I talked to three and the head of the Engineering department and they all said I am fine, math is the main focus.
Online wise I make so many mistakes, someone said because I type to fast….anyway I want to improve it online…please help. -Auggie

Being a women
By August J. A.

Being a women brings me such joy. I am a women of looks and strength, I take pride with body, my soul, and my outlook on life.
My feet carry me well for work and school, my eyes see the beauty that some may miss. My long hair blows with excitement and glee…yes I am that women that you see. My small curves, my large eyes, my cute feet and my sexy small body speaks for all women of the world. Yes thats me. I am like any other women who enjoys the labor of work and clean, who is stress free when jogging, who enjoys pleasing her man..her love, the leader. Yes thats me I speak for every women.

Ok I thats a little of it. What do you think??

ITS A POEM CLASS!! I don't need it but took it for fun!! Just look at my English skills…my God…you people :/
I forgot who i'm dealing with..poem class………I took it for fun…its a non credit. You know like a knitting class?? And for my English class I finished my 10 page essay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks, but I am speaking froma creative mind…if my hair had feelings. But thank you for the only one to answer me.
Sips green tea…
Thanks : )

And no I am not Kris….he is too smart!! But nope i'm Auggie : )

You could improve your online writing skills by reading some poetry. I’m not being smart about this, but what you have written here is prose, not poetry.

Poetry has rhythm and meter, it uses words to express a dimension beyond words, not create a shopping list of attributes.

The one line I like, “my long hair blows with excitement and glee’ is made trite by the use of an old fashioned and unlikely word “glee”, which appears to have been added simply to rhyme with a word in the next line. That might not be right, but it’s what it looks like and it reduces the impact of your poem.

Talk to your tutor about how to structure your poem more successfully, or you could try exercises like haiku, where the idea is to be very strict in using language to create a formally structured poem.

It’s very good practice.

Oh yeah, btw ~ I used to think you are Kris W, but I’m more inclined now to think you’re Trevor/Priscilla. It’s the use of language.

Cheers :-)

Has anyone gone to beauty school to become an esthetician?

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Im thinking about going to paul mitchell in orange county ,ca for skin care, not hair!

Wow. I could’ve sworn I answered this before. Anyways, my sister actually did and she has done makeup for various people. She does their makeup and deals with their faces, not hair. So, yes, you can. Just go to the chool and see what courses they have on it. Hope I helped and good luck!

P.S. She’s in Miami or some part of florida. That is all I know of her where abouts so far.

About my high school crush?

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I had this crush on this absolutely gorgeous girl in high school. Beauty queen, among the top in class, got accepted into a great school, etc. While we have remained just friends for a long time, the following has occurred within the past year:

1. She invites me to her college graduation party at her parent's house. The invitation I receive says 1:00pm; nobody else begins to show up until 2:00pm.
2. When I got to the party, I met her on the back porch. She asks her parents to go back inside the house so her and I can talk alone.
3. At the end of the party, and after so many years, I finally muster the courage to ask her out to dinner. She agrees.
4. Well, she began a new summer internship; that, coupled with my work schedule, threw our date out of the question. As it turns out, we were never able to go out last summer. She became very upset.
5. Nine months has elapsed; she has just now started speaking to me again.

I still like her. Does she like me? Thanks!
Before some smart alec tells me "oh, this is the wrong category for this question," I KNOW it is! I'll place it where I want. Thanks!
LOL…thanks Pancake!

Yes she does dude, but you might blow it, if u approach it while you stay in your current head space… The reason she prob likes you is that you become a little bit more cool and relaxed than before, stay that way, dont put too much pressure on the outcome, and act almost as if you dont care cos u got so much on, she will sense you have an 'air' of power and composure and then you will be holding the cards.
Good luck dude. (dont appear desperate)

Isn’t this ridiculous! ?

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That the Democraps are complaining about Sarah Palin having no experience and yet Obama has LESS!!!

They don’t like what she represents:Palin was born Sarah Louise Heath in Sandpoint, Idaho, the daughter of Sarah Heath (née Sheeran), a school secretary, and Charles R. Heath, a science teacher and track coach.She is of English, Irish, and German ancestry. Her family moved to Alaska when she was an infant She and her father would sometimes wake at 3 a.m. to hunt moose before school, and the family regularly ran 5K and 10K races.

Palin attended Wasilla High School in Wasilla, Alaska, where she was the head of the Fellowship of Christian Athletes chapter at the school and the point guard and captain of the school’s basketball team. She helped the team win the Alaska small-school basketball championship in 1982, hitting a critical free throw in the last seconds of the game, despite having an ankle stress fracture at the time. She earned the nickname “Sarah Barracuda” because of her intense play and was the leader of team prayer before games.

In 1984, Palin won the Miss Wasilla beauty contest, then finished second in the Miss Alaska pageant, at which she won a college scholarship. In the Wasilla pageant, she played the flute and won “Miss Congeniality”.

Palin attended Hawaii Pacific College in Hilo, Hawaii, in 1982 for a semester, where she majored in Business Administration, and transferred in 1983 to North Idaho College. In 1987, Palin received a Bachelor of Science degree in communications-journalism from the University of Idaho, where she also minored in political science. Palin briefly worked in broadcasting as a sports reporter for local Anchorage television stations and with her husband in commercial fishing.

She then started her run for political office starting with the City Council and working her way to Governor……NOW….what did Obama do? Stapled some posters to a telephone pole?

I think it is more ridiculous that they are criticizing her for going back to work after giving birth. Apparently only Dem mom’s are allowed to do that. GOP moms are to stay home with their babies.

I guess the Dems think that GOP dads cannot handle child care.

Ideas for a school project?

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I need to do a project about perspectives and analysis, basically I can choose from films, music lyrics, poems, passages in a novel to analyse and offer my perspective of it, and it should something specific, like postmodernism in 'American Beauty' (the film), do any of you have any good ideas for a film that I can analyse? specifically a scene so can focus on a part of the film since the presentation is 6-10 minutes max, I go to Upenn and this is for my arts course would anyone like to offer some ideas? it can be almost anything

Oooo…this is a fun question…

You could go with a serious theme, such as isolation in 'Apocolypse Now' or regret and redemption in 'American History X'

You could take a movie like 'Fight Club' or 'Lucky Number Sleven' or 'The Sixth Sense' and discuss the effect of withholding information from the viewer, and how that effects the final reveal.

Perhaps you could look at whether or not movies like 'Blood Diamond' or 'Hotel Rwanda' are successful in transmitting a moral lesson, or if they just turn attrocity into entertainment.

You could examine an older children's movie, Disney perhaps, and discuss the way that women/minorities are portrayed. (you would be supprised at how horrible it is if you examine them closely)

You could examine a film like 'Fear and Loathing in Los Vegas' and discuss the degree to which it serves as a social satire.

Or, you could look at bias in a documentary, such as 'Sicko' or 'The Take', and the impact that bias has on the way a view percieves the movie.

Hope these give you a good starting point! Good Luck!

where should i move to in New York?

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after i graduate from high school im planning on going to Empire beauty school and MUD. there both located in Manhattan and living there is expensive. where can me and my friend rent a 2 or 3 bedroom apartment cheap?? but isnt too far from downtown and midtown manhattan. my friend was thinking Brooklyn.

we can afford around 2500 and were gonna get 1 or 2 roomates

With all due respect to a previous poster There are no 5-10k housing units 100 miles upstate.
try 20 times those numbers If you do look up here figure out your commuting costs, time included, I would look in Queens or Brooklyn